The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The picture compares the Central Library's floor plan 20 years ago and now. We can see that there was a lot of places had been redesigned compared to twenty years ago.
However
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, the constructional features mostly remained the same, only for changes conducted. In terms of equipment, we can see that there were tables and chairs in the central area, but it is empty now. In the new plan, we can tell there are multiple new pieces of furniture installed,
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as couches, information desks, and machines that help people to borrow and search books. There are several redesigns of areas, the
room
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at the top left corner is more spacious now and there are children's fiction books as opposed to CDs, videos, and computer games. The original children's books area is now a lecture
room
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, the construction design remains the same. It is noticeable that the enquiry desk had been turned into a cafe
room
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,
this
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room
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experienced the most change in terms of construction.
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, the computer
room
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now was the reading
room
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where people read magazines and learn the news, the door has been shifted to the adjacent to the right.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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