The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given structural illustration outlines the steps involved in the manufacturing of
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water
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a water
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purifier and the way it operates to filter the
water
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.
Additionally
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, there are four steps involved in the purification of
water
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. At an
overall
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look, the process initiates with the pouring of
water
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from a container into a drum used for filtration and ends with the potable
water
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in the glass.
According to
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the diagram, the impure
water
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is
spilled
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in a big storage can which has layers of sand, charcoal and gravel used for filtering
water
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. After
that
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the can is closed with a plastic cover and any impurities get settled and clean drinking
water
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comes on the top. The purified
water
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is
then
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passed through a pipe which attaches two cans
that is
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the purifying can and storing can. Once the
water
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is cleaned, it goes into the can used for storing through a thin pipe and the
water
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can be collected in a glass and is fit for
consuming
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.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • illustrates
  • simple water filter
  • constructed
  • functions
  • produce
  • clean drinking water
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • relevant
  • introduction
  • explanation
  • construction
  • description
  • filtered water
  • original water source
  • conclusion
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