Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. Do you agree or disagree?

In
this
contemporary
era
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a group of
individual
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individuals
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believe that we have access to a wide range of choices in every
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. I completely agree with
this
opinion as technology has simplified our lives and almost everything is accessible. It is my view that, owing to
developments
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of different gadgets,
people
can effortlessly select the type of
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or even purchase their basic commodities among a variation of products.
Moreover
, what technology did was
providing
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people
with extended choices from a virtual local
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bazaar
to
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brands
.
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Therefore
, not only does it enhance the standards of living but
also
makes justice in order to accessibility from all over the world.
For example
, some goods used to produce specially for
people
of a specific part of
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,
whereas
these days it is no longer a prohibition and even it is an opportunity to earn more profit.
In contrast
, some
people
believe that they do not have numerous choices as they cannot effort many goods. They insist that many options are for some unique groups of
people
.
However
, I do not find
this
argument convincing as development is playing a vital role in
this
modern world.
In addition
,
people
should
to
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augment their situation as well, if they need a higher education level so as to better job positions and more money, they should strive
hardly
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to gain that prosperity.
Besides
, even
people
have access to a large number of free courses which are highly beneficial for improvement.
For instance
,
people
who argue that they cannot afford to pay for some educational courses,
they
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can utilize some virtual classes
such
as YouTube channels
instead
of checking their social media.
To conclude
, I completely agree with the availability of numerous options in our lives because
due to
the investment in technology,
people
have access to almost everything which used to
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issue. Thanks to these
up-to-the-minues
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up-to-the-minute
gadgets, lives became easier compared to the past.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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