The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The data provided in the form of a table compares underground
railway
systems in six different cities in terms of when they were constructed,
killometres
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kilometres
of routes and the number of travellers per year.
Overall
, the underground
railway
which was located in London was the oldest and longest underground
railway
compared with other surveyed cities.
In contrast
, the one in Los Angeles was the newest and shortest
railway
transportation system.
Additionally
,
railway
in the Tokyo was the most crowded metro by far. In 1863, an underground
railway
system was built with a length of 394
killometres
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kilometres
which was able to transfer 775 million
people
per year. The
railway
systems which setting up in Paris and Tokyo in 1900 and 1927 respectively, can be used by more than 1000 million
people
for at least 155
killometres
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kilometres
. In 1976, only 144
people
per year use the Washington DC train to travel for a distance of 122
killometres
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kilometres
. The underground train in Kyoto and Los Angeles were used to transfer almost 50
people
for a significantly short distance nearly under 30
killometres
Correct your spelling
kilometres
.
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