The map shows what an area looked like in 1986 and in the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the changes
happened
from 1986 to today.
Correct pronoun usage
that happened
Overall
, a few places have been removed since 1986 and replaced by new buildings, and some of the existing places have occupied more spaces. However
, the current development seems the focus on urbanization instead
of rural areas.
Firstly
, in 1986, the majority of the land have been covered with farmland and animals were able to move freely. There were a few local shops and a small school building, also
one garden with big setting places. The number of houses was very less to cater to local people as a resident.
On the other hand
, in the present era, Most of the land has been covered by the
residential houses, Correct article usage
apply
also
there is no space for farm animals and garden
. The retirement home has replaced the original garden space and the school has been converted into a multistory building. Fix the agreement mistake
gardens
Furthermore
, there is no space for a local shop, however
, there are no changes in the post office, river stoke and bridge location.Submitted by kintans54 on
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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