the maps below show the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780,1860 and 200

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The layouts illustrate the appearance of the town of Willington in three different years. Looking from the

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perspective, it is readily apparent that

this

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area experienced a variety of changes since 1780. It is noticeable that the town was expanded and transformed, and a lot of constructions were replaced or diminished,

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, the place for homes was unaltered. With regards to the second map, in 1860 the number of houses increased two times compared to the year 1780,

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the number of farms considerably decreased.

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, a new bridge was established in order to connect two sides of the wide river.

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the third layout, a forest on the right side at the bottom was destroyed and replaced by different buildings

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as schools and sports fields in 2000.

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, previous farms were demolished,

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, it brought an opportunity to build an abundance of shops along the river.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

151 words

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Nowadays more and more older people who need employment have to compete with younger people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are the solutions?