the maps below show the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780,1860 and 200
The layouts illustrate the appearance of the town of Willington in three different years.
Looking from the
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that this
area experienced a variety of changes since 1780. It is noticeable that the town was expanded and transformed, and a lot of constructions were replaced or diminished, however
, the place for homes was unaltered.
With regards to the second map, in 1860 the number of houses increased two times compared to the year 1780, while
the number of farms considerably decreased. Moreover
, a new bridge was established in order to connect two sides of the wide river.
According to
the third layout, a forest on the right side at the bottom was destroyed and replaced by different buildings such
as schools and sports fields in 2000. In addition
, previous farms were demolished, however
, it brought an opportunity to build an abundance of shops along the river.Submitted by sofsya.fedorenko.2001 on
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