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The amount of drinkable water for people is decreasing. Why is this? What can be done?

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The amount of drinkable
water
 for
people
 is decreasing. Why is
this
? What can be done? The fresh
water
 in our world becomes less and with time
people
 will not find a
water
 source to take what they need. It is important to know the reasons and solutions for
this
 phenomenon.
To begin
 with,
water
 is the most important resource in humans’ lives.
People
 depend on
water
 because nothing can be done without
water
. Some scientists discover that our body contains more than 70% of
water
,
moreover
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this
 percentage says that without
water
 no life will be on our planet.
In addition
, there are many reasons why fresh
water
 is not increasing, bad uses of
water
 and many more. The misuse of
water
 with the effect of hot weather and
few
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 rain all these reasons cost decreasing of
water
.
Therefore
, our responsibility is to save
water
 on our planet by teaching kids in schools how
the
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water
 is valuable and how to use it in
a
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the
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 correct way.
Also
 keep making small steps and teaching it to all
people
, like
close
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 the
water
 after you finish.
However
, rivers should stay clean. Keep and add more trees so
this
 will affect the weather in a good way to increase the rain to keep fresh
water
 available.
To conclude
, after providing the ideas above,
its
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 recommended that governments and
peoples
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people
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 should cooperate to keep fresh
water
 on our planet for
this
 generation and the next generation by knowing that
water
 is
backbone
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the backbone
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 of our life.
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