Shops should not be allowed to sell any food or drink that has been scientifically proven to be bad for people's health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is widely believed that
shops
should not be allowed to sell any food
or drink
that has been scientifically proven to be bad for people
's health
. Personally, I completely agree with this
view for a variety of reasons.
Firstly
, shops
should sell any food
and drink
that has been scientifically proven to be good or not bad for people
's health
. This
means that selling all products is good for people
's health
. For example
, If the shops
sell one kind of food
that has been scientifically proven to be bad for people
's health
. Then
customers buy and use them. After some days, the customers feel dizzy and cold. They can talk by using this
kind of food
.
Secondly
, when the shop
wants to sell any food
and drink
, the shop
needs to check information about this
product. If the shop
knows any product of drink
and food
are not good, I think the shop
doesn't sell this
. For example
, the sales introduce some kind of drink
, but all kinds of drink
don't have been scientifically proven to be good for people
's healthy. Maybe all kinds of drinks bring chemical colour. the shops
don't buy this
.
In conclusion, people
's health
is important. These shops
should not be allowed to sell any food
or drink
that has been scientifically proven to be bad for people
's health
.Submitted by yeshomeclass on
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