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the chart below gives information about the groth of urban population in certain part of the world including the prediction of the further.

the chart below gives information about the groth of urban population in certain part of the world including the prediction of the further.
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, the bar chart will you straight demographic figures for the increasing urbanised
population
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 in major parts of the globe including a number of future gains in 2030. In 1930, the whole world accounted for 30% of the major expansion in
population
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, which surprisingly increased to almost 50% of breast growth in 2000. It is
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 predicted that it would go to reach 60% of the rise in
population
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 in 2030 respectively.
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, African countries noted approximately 10% of the rise in urbanised society in 1980, which will apparently cross over 50% of the growing number in 2030. A similar pattern would be seen on the Asian continent at approx. 55% of burst in 2030.
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, Latin America had significantly high growth in
population
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 in comparison to others at nearly 40% in 9050 with a gradual rise up to 70% in 2000 and there is a probability of 80% price in the urbanised communities by 2030 which would make it the highest in
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.
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