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The food travels thousands of miles from farm to consumer. Some people think it would be better to our environment and economy if people only ate local produced food. What extend does the advantage outweigh disadvantage?

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In
this
 world,
people
 are more professional some
people
 do their marketing by working very hard and
food
 travels thousands of miles from farm to consumer there are many
kind
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kinds
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 of
people
 some
people
 like organic
food
, and some
people
 like the
food
 in the
market
 which is packed
from
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for
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 many months. There are many benefit
by
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to
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 eating local produce
food
 they are very fresh and high-protein there are many
people
 suffering from disease, and getting ill if we ate healthy
food
, we will never suffer from any kind of disease if we eat healthy
food
 we can build our energy to if we eat local produce
food
 we can improve our economy to it will be very helpful to our economy. The
food
 from thousand of my farm to
consumer
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the consumer
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are
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is
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 not fresh
food
 most of them will be damaged from
inside
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the inside
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 and don't have much protein there will be many home fullness by eating
market
,
food
 the
market
food
 where bought by like there will be many home fullness by eating
market
market
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apply
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food
 with bought in many days kept meaning month so it is very harmful to our health so we should avoid it if we bought all the
food
 farm we could not improve our economy.
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