Small businesses are disappearing and being replaced by large multinational companies. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this situation?

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Nowadays we can see changes in all
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sectors
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advancement
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in technology. Most of the foreign companies have taken
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place of small companies.
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situation.
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, an international
company
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will play a vital role in the development of all countries because
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company
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contains experience
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wider
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a wider
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part of the world.
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organization
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organizations
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may able to run their production with less money which would eventually impact
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the local
people
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in terms of cheaper
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prices
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. Not only
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, local residents may able to explore the test of other
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so indirectly,
people
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will be familiar with
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another country
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.
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, Hindustan Unilever is giving the best price and good experience in
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budget
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products
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though having
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international brand.
People
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can make
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balance after working in
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a western
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western
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company
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because of their
employee friendly
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policies.
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, small businesses are
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by common
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those
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are living in a nearby area.
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micro businesses always help to boost the
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growth of
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the particular
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country.
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it would be
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a detrimental
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impact on
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the country
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country
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GDP if
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this
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these
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businees
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businesses
will be replaced by
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giant groups.
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, inflation may rise in
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type of environment if the small shop will be disappeared
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pressure
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the pressure
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of
multinational
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a multinational
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company
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.
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, Most
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handpicker
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handpicked
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jobs have been
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taken
away by
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computers
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because
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don't
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human interference. In conclusion, there are multiple benefits of having
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a mulinational
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mulinational
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multinational
organaization
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organisation
by keeping
values
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the values
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of small
enterprise
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enterprises
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so both
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business can contribute
on
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in
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theri
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their
way without
hamppering
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hampering
each other activities.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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