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Small businesses are disappearing and being replaced by large multinational companies. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this situation?

#businesses #companies #situation
Nowadays we can see changes in all
the
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sectors
due to
advancement
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advancements
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 in technology. Most of the foreign companies have taken
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 place of small companies.
This
 essay will throw light on both pros and cons of
this
 situation.
Firstly
, an international
company
 will play a vital role in the development of all countries because
these
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company
 contains experience
through
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wider
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a wider
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 part of the world.
Big
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organization
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organizations
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 may able to run their production with less money which would eventually impact
to
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the local
people
 in terms of cheaper
price
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prices
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. Not only
this
, local residents may able to explore the test of other
nation
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nations
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 so indirectly,
people
 will be familiar with
other country
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another country
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.
For example
, Hindustan Unilever is giving the best price and good experience in
lower
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 budget
product
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products
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 though having
a
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 international brand.
People
 can make
work life
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 balance after working in
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a western
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western
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company
 because of their
employee friendly
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 policies.
On the other hand
, small businesses are
running
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 by common
people
those
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who
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 are living in a nearby area.
Hence
 micro businesses always help to boost the
economy
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 growth of
particular
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the particular
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 country.
Hence
 it would be
detrimental
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a detrimental
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 impact on
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the country
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country
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country's
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 GDP if
this
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these
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businees
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businesses
 will be replaced by
the
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giant groups.
Furthermore
, inflation may rise in
such
 type of environment if the small shop will be disappeared
in
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pressure
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the pressure
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 of
multinational
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a multinational
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company
.
For instance
, Most
of
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handpicker
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handpicked
handpicking
 jobs have been
tak
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taken
 away by
computer
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computers
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 because
it
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they
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 don't
required
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 human interference. In conclusion, there are multiple benefits of having
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a mulinational
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mulinational
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multinational
organaization
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organisation
 by keeping
values
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the values
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 of small
enterprise
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enterprises
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 so both
the
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business can contribute
on
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in
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theri
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their
 way without
hamppering
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hampering
 each other activities.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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