Organized tour to remote areas and community is increasingly popular. Is it a positive or negative development for the local people and the environment?
With the improvement of
tourism
and globalisation, most Use synonyms
tourism
agencies are organizing tours to the countryside these days. Some people believe that Use synonyms
this
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tourism
activity helps to develop in rural areas opportunities which Use synonyms
locals
have, Use synonyms
while
others think that the reverse is true. Linking Words
This
has some positive impacts on the local people, but I think the detrimental effects on the environment are more significant and that the issue is more of a negative development.
First of all, the environment in the countryside hosts various kinds of animals, Linking Words
such
as birds, fish etc. Linking Words
According to
scientific reports, many types of fish are affected in a negative way during the Linking Words
tourism
season. Use synonyms
For example
, the population of salmon in the ocean dramatically decreased, after the number of tours increased in Iceland. Linking Words
Thus
, tourists should care for and respect the life condition of local and endangered species of animals.
In regard to, people who live in rural areas have limited chances about their life conditions. Linking Words
For instance
, the amount of food depends on the weather Linking Words
condition
, Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
additionally
, after a hard winter season the amount of harvested crops is just enough only local Linking Words
peoples
eating habits. During the tour season, Change noun form
people's
locals
couldn't answer the demand of tourists. Because of Use synonyms
this
, Linking Words
tourism
agencies ought to access fresh information about local life.
So, Use synonyms
to sum up
, it is clear to say that, Linking Words
tourism
is one the most important income sources for the Use synonyms
locals
. Use synonyms
However
, especially in Linking Words
dangered
situations, the government and Correct your spelling
endangered
locals
should cooperate together to protect their natural environment. I think that the negative environmental consequences that Use synonyms
this
situation brings are far more significant.Linking Words
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Consider expanding on how exactly tourism impacts local economies and what specific measures can mitigate negative effects.
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The essay addresses the prompt and demonstrates understanding of the topic by discussing both perspectives.
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