The chart below shows the number of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph provides information related to the
number
of adults who practiced some sports in 1997 and 2017, in a particular place.
Overall
, it is essential to highlight that, comparing both years,
it is clear that
the quantity of
people
who played sports was higher in 2017, except for the
number
of participants who practiced cricket, which declined, and those who swam, which was constant figure over that period.
Moreover
, the
number
of adults who played basketball, football, and rugby grew significantly. As aforementioned, cricket became less popular:
while
in 1997 around 27
thousand
adults practiced it, in 2018, less than 10
thousand
people
played that game.
In contrast
, there was a sharp growth in the football and rugby figures, which bore resemblance for those sports: in 1997, approximately 30
thousand
individuals played each of those games, but that
number
climbed to almost 50
thousand
people
in 2017. Basketball was a sport that
also
had a significant increase on its
number
of participants since it was played by less than 10
thousand
persons in 1997, but more than 20
thousand
people
played it in 2017.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • participation rate
  • increase/decrease in numbers
  • trend
  • decade
  • relatively stable
  • major sports
  • potential reasons
  • contributing factors
  • public interest
  • comparison
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