The two maps below show the town of Barmouth before and after proposed new changes to stop cars entering the old town. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate how Barmouth old
town
was changed to prevent cars from coming into the old town
. Overall
, it is clear that
the old town
has been modified completely for more pedestrian-friendly features after the construction.
The primary change is that the two entrances for only pedestrians in the east and west of the old town
have been facilitated, instead
of one vehicle-only entrance in the west was founded before and also
, now, automobile drivers are able to park safely in car lots by both side entrances. The main road along River Tweed has vanished, however
, a walking path was established so that people enjoy exercise, and have a rest at cafés and restaurants on the walking track. River Tweed has now two bridges in the west and east which take people to the main roads as well as
the car parks.
Additionally
, currently
the old Add a comma
,currently
town
has a supermarket by the east side of the bridge as a result
the bridge enables residents to access the shop both on foot and/or by car.Submitted by slowloris4444 on
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