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Some parents believe that a child should not waste time by reading ‎entertainment books. Instead, they should spend time reading educational ‎books only. What is your opinion about this?‎

#parents #child #waste #time #‎entertainment #books #‎books
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 cars manufactured in three distinct countries namely Argentina, Australia and Thailand, in 2003, 2006 and 2009.
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, there was a progressive growth pattern witnessed in the data of Argentina and Thailand, and the reserve was true for that of Australia. In terms of car production in Thailand, launching at exactly 735,852 in 2003, it experienced a dramatic and exponential hike to 1,162,356 which reached its peak after a three-year period of time.
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 of growth. Initiating at about 235,088 in 2003, it climbed constantly and gradually to 466,089 which was nearly a double compared to itself after 6 years. With regard to that of Australia, it was the only data which went down rapidly and consistently by less than a half after the mentioned period of time.
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