The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.
The maps compare a public
library
when it opened 20 years ago and now its recent like.
Overall
, it is clear that
a myriad of changes has been made throughout the 20 years period, and many new facilities are added, which made the library
become modernised and easily accessible materials. While
the entrance remains the same since it opened.
The centre of the library
used to have tables and chairs, and now are cleared. On the right part of the library
, the Enquiry desk for the tickets and book returns, where on the right of the entrance, is now renovated into a cafe. Opposite that area
was for Children
's books
and now refurbished to the lecture room, which is the new facilities. Meanwhile, the area
for children
's books
has moved to the left of the library
, which also
is renamed as Children
's fiction
books
. The place between the lecture and cafe was for the Adult non-fiction
books
but now is for the information desk, adult fiction
books
as well as
self-service machines, which makes the library
become automatise.
On the left of the main entrance, it was a reading room and now redevelop as a computer room. On the other side in the left part of the library
, despite the area
for children
's fiction
books
, two sofas are added. This
area
is also
for holding storytelling events. The area
for placing all reference books
is used to be the one for storing adult fiction
books
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