the two maps below show road acces to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010

the two maps below show road acces to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010
The
two
plans illustrate the location of roads nearby a city hospital in
two
different years (2007 and 2010). Looking from the
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the area experienced some significant changes,
while
three main roads and the building were not altered during the whole given period. With regards to the first map, in 2007 City Road to the south was perpendicular to Hospital Road in the centre,
in addition
,
Ring
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Round which was built around the hospital.
Moreover
, staff and public car parks were located in the
south-eastern
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of the layout.
According to
the second plan, a previous parking zone was
was
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divided into
two
parts,
therefore
a new public one was established to the east.
Also
, in a three-year period
two
massive roundabouts were constructed in the middle of the layout and
two
separate roads connected them with a bus station, which was constructed to the west in 2010
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