Crime appears to be rising in the most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend and propose some solutions you think would be effective.

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most

countries

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increased and

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issue is more noticeable among youth. The roots can have three reasons and a number of solutions are proposed. It’s thinkable that the

increase

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delinquency among young

people

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their unemployment.

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too much unemployment time's

people

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youngsters

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among youngsters

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with offenders and

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to them for commit

crimes

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increase

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also

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the other underlying factor can be spending time on the

internet

as popular entertainment in

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most

countries

of the world.

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the

internet

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a good teacher for learning everything and

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teaching illegal activities.

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people

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, about complications of

crimes

could be

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cause

committing

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crimes

by members of society. Perhaps Some

people

only know the old and traditional methods of delinquency, stealing, found, car crime and murder. They may not find the dilemmas of choosing right from wrong in terms of the law. Turning to possible remedies, if parents

limited

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to using

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the

internet

, youngsters would less face with

crimes

and criminals in the

countries

of the world. So it can be hoped that they will be less in predicaments.

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of

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with

this

problem,

if

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courses and classes were held to

increase

the level of awareness of

people

, especially Yong

people

, about new schemes of committing

crimes

and classes for moral principles, it would mend probably. In conclusion, it appears that in

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to

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committing

crimes

by

people

and notably young’s in

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most

countries

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several factors Instance of

internet

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and the level of

knowledge’s

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people

could

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be effective. Answers to the problem can be holding

the

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classes

of

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moral principles and the limit to use

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internet

for young

people

.