Crime appears to be rising in the most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend and propose some solutions you think would be effective.
It seems that the crime rate in
the
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countries
of the world have
increased and Correct subject-verb agreement
has
this
issue is more noticeable among youth. The roots can have three reasons and a number of solutions are proposed.
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apply
people
is due to
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people
especially youngsters
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among youngsters
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countries
of the world. Obviously
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internet
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this
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In addition
, the low awareness of people
, especially Yong people
, about complications of crimes
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cause Correct article usage
the underlying
committing
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of committing
crimes
by members of society. Perhaps Some people
only know the old and traditional methods of delinquency, stealing, found, car crime and murder. They may not find the dilemmas of choosing right from wrong in terms of the law.
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, youngsters would less face with crimes
and criminals in the countries
of the world. So it can be hoped that they will be less in predicaments. Also
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another possible method
other possible methods
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is if
increase
the level of awareness of people
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and classes for moral principles, it would mend probably.
In conclusion, it appears that in increase
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in
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by people
and notably young’s in the
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countries
several factors Instance of Add a comma
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internet
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could
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