The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map above illustrates how the recycling process of aluminium cans is being done, in
this
,essay we are going to go through the steps.
Firstly
, there are these special trashcans for recycling that people through their recyclable waste in them, then
the collection cars arrive and get the garbage to the factory, where the trash will be washed and wiped out, separated, shred and after all will be pressed by the machines there.
Furthermore
, when the first steps are done, the recycling operation starts ,so the garbage will be heated in
a suitable temperature to melt down so they can get a shape, after ,that there is a rolling stage where the heated trash will be rolled to 2.5mm-6mm thick aluminium.
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Finally
, the rolled aluminium will turn into the cans again, and drinks will be poured into them. Also
, as it has been written, only 74% of recyclable garbage will be reused.Submitted by arezoo.ariaa on
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