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Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward student who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Currently, how to conduct an award between
students
 who gain supreme
performance
 and others who acquire
progress
 during the term has drawn more attention. As far as I am concerned, giving the two different types of
students
 encouraging awards simultaneously is vital. For those who hold the first view, academic achievement is the only criterion to measure whether
students
 can win the prize. Most often they support schools to make everyone’s grades public and who catch the award will be judged on them. The study
performance
 represents how hard a student has worked during the school year, naturally,
that is
 the criteria. Admittedly, academic
performance
 is one of the important
element
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 of appraising awards, for others, it is equally significant to reward those who make huge
progress
. Different
students
 will show various changes in the learning process at each stage, some of them come from behind with amazing perseverance and talent. Even if they do not get the best academic results,
the
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progress
 and effort deserve recognition. If
this
 group of people do not get the same reward, it will cause
the
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poor
students
 to lose the motivation to learn and improve. In my opinion, on matter
students
 with good academic
performance
 or
students
 who have made great
progress
 should be valued and rewarded. Giving rewards only to
students
 who do well in their studies will discourage
students
 who make
progress
,
students
 with good grades do not get the recognition they deserve, which will cause psychological imbalance. Take me
for example
, as the key period of personality development is in
the
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high school, I have experienced both dramatic
improvement
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 in academic
performance
 and maintaining good achievement, fortunately, my teacher did a good balance between the two parts so that I finished my studies with a positive attitude. Generally speaking, how to treat
students
 with supreme achievement and obvious
progress
 is an important pedagogical topic, getting the balance right and giving appropriate rewards is crucial to managing and educating
students
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