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The charts below give information about the people use public library and the main reasons to visit in Britain in 1991 in 2000.

The charts below give information about the people use public library and the main reasons to visit in Britain in 1991 in 2000.
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The given pie charts show
information
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 about how many reasons people use the public library in Britain between 1991 to 2000.
Overall
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, it is clearly seen that the percentage of people who borrow or return
books
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 saw an upward trend over the period shown. The percentage of the
purpose
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 for borrowing and returning
books
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 was the highest, during the percentage of the
purpose
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 for studying and obtaining
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 was the lowest in both 1991 and 2000. Looking at the start of the period in the figure, in 2016, there was a reachable peak of 65% in the
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 of the
purpose
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 for borrowing and returning
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,
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 the
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 of the
purpose
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 for studying and obtaining
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 had just 10%, a small minority. With read newspaper or magazine, it had about 15%. In 2000, the
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 of the reason for borrowing and returning
books
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 decreased moderately about 55%, and that of the reason for reading newspapers or magazines increased 20%.
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, the
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reasons for studying and obtaining
information
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 declined by about 2% and 5%, and the
amount
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 of
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reasons for borrowing or returning videos had about 15%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words information, books, purpose, amount with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
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