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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph compares the
number
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 of
visitors
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 that visited a specific Caribbean
island
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 from 2010 to 2017. The unit of data is millions of
visitors
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.
Overall
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, the trend of total
people
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 who visited the
island
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 was upward.
While
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 the
number
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 of
visitors
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 who stayed on the
island
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 went up and down, the
number
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 of
visitors
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 that stayed on
cruise
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ships
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 increased during that time. In 2010, the total
number
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 of individuals that visited a particular Caribean
island
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 was one
million
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. From 2010 to 2015,
this
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number
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 rose sharply to more than 1.5
million
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 and reached 2.7
million
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.
This
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number
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 in 2016 stayed remained and after one year reached its peak of 3.5
million
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. The
number
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 of
visitors
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 staying on the
island
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 was more than the
number
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 of
people
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 who stayed on
cruise
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ships
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 between 2010 and 2015. The
number
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 of
people
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 on the
island
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 was more than 0.5
million
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 in 2010 and 1.5
million
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 in 2015.
people
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 that stayed on
cruise
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ships
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 started at under 0.5
million
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 and reached 1.3
million
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 which was 0.2
million
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 less than the others. In 2016, the
number
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 of
visitors
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 on
cruise
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ships
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 overcame the
number
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 of
visitors
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 staying on the
island
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, 1.5
million
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 and 1.2
million
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 respectively. The
number
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 of both of which increased in the following year to 2
million
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 and 1.5
million
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 respectively.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, island, people, cruise, ships, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 10 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 5 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuating trend
  • initially
  • significant increase
  • slight decline
  • momentary setback
  • steady increase
  • minor fluctuations
  • reaching a peak
  • moderate growth
  • notable growth
  • surge in popularity
  • seasonal or yearly factors
  • stagnation
  • growing appeal
  • visitors worldwide
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