The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the
number
of visitors
that visited a specific Caribbean island
from 2010 to 2017. The unit of data is millions of visitors
.
Overall
, the trend of total people
who visited the island
was upward. While
the number
of visitors
who stayed on the island
went up and down, the number
of visitors
that stayed on cruise
ships
increased during that time.
In 2010, the total number
of individuals that visited a particular Caribean island
was one million
. From 2010 to 2015, this
number
rose sharply to more than 1.5 million
and reached 2.7 million
. This
number
in 2016 stayed remained and after one year reached its peak of 3.5 million
.
The number
of visitors
staying on the island
was more than the number
of people
who stayed on cruise
ships
between 2010 and 2015. The number
of people
on the island
was more than 0.5 million
in 2010 and 1.5 million
in 2015. people
that stayed on cruise
ships
started at under 0.5 million
and reached 1.3 million
which was 0.2 million
less than the others. In 2016, the number
of visitors
on cruise
ships
overcame the number
of visitors
staying on the island
, 1.5 million
and 1.2 million
respectively. The number
of both of which increased in the following year to 2 million
and 1.5 million
respectively.Submitted by shahab_e2020 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, island, people, cruise, ships, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 10 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 5 times.
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