The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the
number
of
visitors
that visited a specific Caribbean
island
from 2010 to 2017. The unit of data is millions of
visitors
.
Overall
, the trend of total
people
who visited the
island
was upward.
While
the
number
of
visitors
who stayed on the
island
went up and down, the
number
of
visitors
that stayed on
cruise
ships
increased during that time. In 2010, the total
number
of individuals that visited a particular Caribean
island
was one
million
. From 2010 to 2015,
this
number
rose sharply to more than 1.5
million
and reached 2.7
million
.
This
number
in 2016 stayed remained and after one year reached its peak of 3.5
million
. The
number
of
visitors
staying on the
island
was more than the
number
of
people
who stayed on
cruise
ships
between 2010 and 2015. The
number
of
people
on the
island
was more than 0.5
million
in 2010 and 1.5
million
in 2015.
people
that stayed on
cruise
ships
started at under 0.5
million
and reached 1.3
million
which was 0.2
million
less than the others. In 2016, the
number
of
visitors
on
cruise
ships
overcame the
number
of
visitors
staying on the
island
, 1.5
million
and 1.2
million
respectively. The
number
of both of which increased in the following year to 2
million
and 1.5
million
respectively.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, island, people, cruise, ships, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 10 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 5 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuating trend
  • initially
  • significant increase
  • slight decline
  • momentary setback
  • steady increase
  • minor fluctuations
  • reaching a peak
  • moderate growth
  • notable growth
  • surge in popularity
  • seasonal or yearly factors
  • stagnation
  • growing appeal
  • visitors worldwide
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