some people like to try new things for example, Places to visit and types of food. other people prefer to keep doing thing they are familary with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.

nowadays, people are more adventurous compared to the past.
whereas
visiting different countries, and trying various
food
is quite Popular.
However
, some encourage
this
aspect
while
others Bag, it is safe to remain in their comfort zones. In my
opinion
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It is good to travel and try new
food
,
nevertheless
, it is important to be careful at all times,
therefor
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therefore
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, I will explain more detail
of
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about
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both
side
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in
thes
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this
essay.
To begin
with, going to
diffrent
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different
place have a
lot
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oflot
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advantages. People can get
knew
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to know
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different
culture
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cultures
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which
help
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helps
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them to
morease
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more
their
knowlodge
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knowledge
, from another side, visiting another
countri
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country
Live us
this
chance to try their local
food
and let you
to
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see various
weather
,
for instance
, I live in
dubai
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Dubai
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and in
dubai
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Dubai
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mostly another is
hat
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so one of the
rosson
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reason
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for me to
traveling
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travelling
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is the
weather
.
In addition
, in some
country
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countries
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, they don't love any activity at night so they can go to countries with commotion
af
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at
night and
enjoy
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themselvesenjoy
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.
For example
one of my friends from Australia came to
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Dubai
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dubai
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Dubai
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and he was interested in night owl in
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Dubai
duhai
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Duhai
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From another hand, some PePole
wants
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save their safe life zone because it could be dangerous,
mybe
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maybe
they
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apply
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some
food
or
weather
can make them sick there was some news
how
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about how
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dead
by
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of
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food
that he ate
of
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or
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another nears about a person
how
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who
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lost his life when he went to visit another
countri
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country
because he couldn't
coke
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come
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up with the
weather
. ln conclusion, it can
good
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be good
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to
travell
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travel
to aboard and try Various
thing
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things
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but
in
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at
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the
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apply
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some
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same
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tim
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time
be careful.
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