The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graphs compare the difference between the initial floor plan of a central

library

20 years ago and the current distribution of the

library

today.

Overall

It is clear that

the reconstructed

library

today is more functional and self-sufficient compared to the original one,

while

tables& chairs in the centre were removed for the larger space. More entertainment rooms are commonly provided for public use. The two entrances to the

library

remained the same.

However

, the

library

now has a lecture

room

, cafe, and computer

room

for

library

users. The

library

left side, which was previously developed with video games, adult fiction books and a reading

room

, is recovered with

room

for children's fiction, reference books, and computing.

Additionally

, there are new sofas for children to join events of meaningful storytelling in the

library

. On the right side, the lecture place which was added for teaching purposes replaced the area of youth's books. By utilizing the information desk and self-service machines, the enquiry desk no need to exist, as the location is reopened for a coffee shop

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Topic Vocabulary:

floor plan
public library
layout
reading area
computer station
multimedia section
children's area
reference section
study cubicles
shelving units
digital media
technological advancements
user behavior
accessibility
traffic flow
modernization
community needs
conversion
allocation
removal

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