The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphs compare the difference between the initial floor plan of a central
library
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20 years ago and the current distribution of the
library
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today.
Overall
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,
It is clear that
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the reconstructed
library
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today is more functional and self-sufficient compared to the original one,
while
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tables& chairs in the centre were removed for the larger space. More entertainment rooms are commonly provided for public use. The two entrances to the
library
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remained the same.
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, the
library
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now has a lecture
room
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, cafe, and computer
room
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for
library
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users. The
library
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left side, which was previously developed with video games, adult fiction books and a reading
room
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, is recovered with
room
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for children's fiction, reference books, and computing.
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, there are new sofas for children to join events of meaningful storytelling in the
library
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. On the right side, the lecture place which was added for teaching purposes replaced the area of youth's books. By utilizing the information desk and self-service machines, the enquiry desk no need to exist, as the location is reopened for a coffee shop
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words library, room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • public library
  • layout
  • reading area
  • computer station
  • multimedia section
  • children's area
  • reference section
  • study cubicles
  • shelving units
  • digital media
  • technological advancements
  • user behavior
  • accessibility
  • traffic flow
  • modernization
  • community needs
  • conversion
  • allocation
  • removal
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