In some countries, fast food restaurants and supermarkets give money to schools to promote their products.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In numerous nations, marketers

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as fast food restaurants and supermarkets realize schools as an opportunity to advertise their

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and they give money to schools so as to their

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offered to pupils.

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there are some benefits associated with

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offering action, I believe the main drawback is more substantial since its adverse effects on students’ lives are countless. On the one hand, a minor advantage is that the accessibility to a wide variety of

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gives students the opportunity to taste different flavours and get familiar with other

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cuisines.

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, some Chinese noodles have become popular among teenagers in my country.

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, another perceived benefit is that children can be aware of the healthiest and safest

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and allocate that to their meals.

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, it is an undeniable fact that a primary disadvantage of junk

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is that they are not nutritious.

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not only are fast

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harmful to their health but

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bring about a growth in consumerism.

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, all students need is highly nutritious meals which result in greater mental development.

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, pupils have been growing in all mental and physical features and their diet plays a vital role in their lives. It is significant to raise public awareness about the harmful impacts of fast

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and strive to boost the quantity of

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homemade

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so as to healthier society and lifestyle.

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, children who are willing to eat slap-up meals are more likely to suffer from obesity.

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, it is true that advertising fast food in schools would seem advantageous under certain circumstances,

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, in my view, its negative influences in terms of the possibility of suffering from different diseases and a rise in consumerism outweigh the advantages.