The table and pie charts show the number of research students in Aaustralia universities in 2001 and 2010

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doing

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research

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Australia

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Australian

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University and categorized into gender between 2001 and 2010.

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, the

number

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researcher

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experienced a significant increase from 2001 to 2010.

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International

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research

student

number

had

consideralbly

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considerably

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growth

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during 9 years period. Upon observation, In 2001, the

number

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from local and abroad who did

a

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research started from 33.657 and 5.192, respectively.

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, local

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researchers

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slightly went up

around

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39.488 students in 2010

while

overseas

student

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students

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dramatically rose

roughly

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around 3 times in

number

(14.593) in 2010. Turning to the

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remaining data, in

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of gender proportion, local

student

researcher

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shared a

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small

percentage of

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men

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and

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women

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around 43% in 2001.

Moreover

, In 2010, the

percentace

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percentage

of boys and girls of local

student

researcher

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researchers

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declined to around 39% and 35% respectively. It can be seen that regarding the growth of

abroad

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researcher

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also

provided the

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of male (12%) and (15%) female

propotion

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proportion

in 2010.