The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The circle charts
illustrates
the percentage in conventional food of three various nutrients and if consumed in large quantity, it might be harmful. Change the verb form
illustrate
Overall
, we observe that although
the usage of sodium
is the most in dinner. Nevertheless
, it was used the least in
breakfast and Change preposition
for
snacks
.
We have three different nutrients (Sodium
, Saturated fats and added sugar) used in the typical meals eaten by individuals in the USA. 43% of sodium
is used in dinner which is the highest. Afterwards, 29% of it is used in
lunch. Change preposition
for
Similarly
, 14% of it is used for breakfast and snacks
. In comparison to that, if we look at the added sugar proportions, we find a total
opposite pattern. Change the word
totally
While
it is used the least in breakfast and lunch i.e., 16% and 19% respectively. At the same time, in case
of Correct article usage
the case
snacks
the added sugar amount was 42%.
Add a comma
,snacks
In contrast
, we also
have saturated fat, which is used in meals as well. However
, it shows a very similar pattern as that of sodium
yet we see a significant decrease of
Change preposition
in
fats
usage in dinner (37%). Change the noun form
fat
Furthermore
, it was used 21
% Change preposition
in 21
in
Change preposition
of
snacks
as well as
26% in
Change preposition
of
lunch
.Fix the agreement mistake
lunches
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, snacks with synonyms.
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