The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the percentage in conventional food of three various nutrients and if consumed in large quantity, it might be harmful.
Overall
, we observe that
although
the usage of
sodium
is the most in dinner.
Nevertheless
, it was used the least
in
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breakfast and
snacks
. We have three different nutrients (
Sodium
, Saturated fats and added sugar) used in the typical meals eaten by individuals in the USA. 43% of
sodium
is used in dinner which is the highest. Afterwards, 29% of it is used
in
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lunch.
Similarly
, 14% of it is used for breakfast and
snacks
. In comparison to that, if we look at the added sugar proportions, we find a
total
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opposite pattern.
While
it is used the least in breakfast and lunch i.e., 16% and 19% respectively. At the same time, in
case
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the case
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of
snacks
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the added sugar amount was 42%.
In contrast
, we
also
have saturated fat, which is used in meals as well.
However
, it shows a very similar pattern as that of
sodium
yet we see a significant decrease
of
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fats
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usage in dinner (37%).
Furthermore
, it was used
21
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in 21
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%
in
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snacks
as well as
26%
in
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of
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lunch
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lunches
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, snacks with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • average percentages
  • nutrients
  • unhealthy
  • meal
  • typical meals
  • categories
  • high percentage
  • distribution
  • patterns
  • trends
  • nutrient-dense
  • data
  • comparison
  • summarize
  • reporting main features
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