Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think it is a positive or negetive development?

Nowadays, the amount of

children

's time expenditure on technological

gadgets

like phones witnessed an increase. There are several reasons behind

this

phenomenon which is

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beneficial

from my point of view so I will discuss these causes and my opinion in

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essay. Technological advancements and convenient use of modern

facilities

are key elements causing the soaring rate of

children

using them for long hours during the day,

for example

,

due to

these improvements and the popularity of modern devices, different categories of content are available in an affordable price and easy access on

gadgets

like phones, tablets and personal computers.

Consequently

, it is more entertaining for

children

and easier for their parents to provide various kinds of

contents

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like books, cartoons, podcasts and other suitable materials using their modern

gadgets

so they can utilise these

facilities

in different times and places. As long as I am concerned, using

this kind

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of

facilities

for

children

is an advantageous aspect of modern life because starting to get familiar with technology

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younger ages

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develop

develops

their skills to handle the upcoming innovations, helps them to reach a level of self-assurance it

also

makes it easier for them to contact their friends and be a part of friends community.

Ofcourse

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Of course

, as much as it is beneficial, it can have some drawbacks considering the limits needed for

a

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children

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children

to use

this

kind of

gadgets

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. So, I think by adequate and suitable parental supervision the disadvantages of modern technologies for

children

would be

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completely

solved and handled so the content they discover or the amount of time spent during the day would be controlled.

To sum up

, I think in the modern era, the utilisation of

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gadgets

is

unevitable

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inevitable

even for youngsters and

although

it is advantageous for them to get familiar with these

facilities

, it should be under the control and supervision of parents and adults to avoid any harm for

children

.