The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The pie chart illustrates the
countries
average household expenses in the year Change noun form
country's
countries'
of
1950 and 2010.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, it can be seen that there are six category
of household expenditures. Housing and Food were highly spent by the population.
Change to a plural noun
categories
To begin
with, Housing expenses were 70 percentage
during 1950Replace the word
per cent
,
but had Remove the comma
apply
fall
in 2010 and Change the verb form
fallen
expenditure
rate was 22%. Correct article usage
the expenditure
Moreover
, the
Food had an increased variation in 2010. The Health care expenses Correct article usage
apply
was
2.4 per cent in 1950 and Change the verb form
were
it
managed to remain constant in 2010.
Despite Correct pronoun usage
they
this
, Education had a plummet variation in 2010 it got dropped by 1 per cent. Furthermore
, Transportaion
had a rise of 15 Correct your spelling
Transportation
percentage
Replace the word
per cent
of
expenditure in 2010. Change preposition
in
In addition
, the major flathold
expense was Correct your spelling
flat hold
other
Change the wording
another
expense
which reached a peak of 20 Fix the agreement mistake
expenses
percent
in 2010.Change the spelling
per cent
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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