the map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton , and planned future development of the site.
The two maps illustrate the present industrial area and future development plan of Norbitoncity.
Overall
, in the clear from the plan; all the factory buildings will be replaced with new residential houses. In addition
, the future map will be adding new buildings and roads in the town.
To according the plans, in the centre will be built a new line from the roundabout and turn worth to cross the river, and a branch lane in the west. Furthermore
; in the South-west beside the big roundabout will establish a shop and in the South make a small roundabout.
at the end
. in the planned future development with the south-east construct many facilities such
as medical centre and playground, and school.Submitted by Layla on
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