The table below shows the cinema viewing figures for films by country, in millions.

The table below shows the cinema viewing figures for films by country, in millions.
The provided table demonstrates the number of
viewers
for
films
per
million
in five
countries
.
Overall
it is evident that India is reflected in the most sweeping viewing digits for
action
, romance and
comedy
films
for both the total
films
and total
countries
. As can be seen,
while
India is ranked as the first country as per the figures in
action
at 8
million
viewers
, romance at 7.5
million
viewers
and
comedy
at 6.5
million
viewers
, the second country after India in
action
and
comedy
movies is Irelan
whereas
records7.6
million
viewers
for
action
and 5.5
million
viewers
for
comedy
films
. In sharp contrast, Irelan advances all the
countries
in Horror movies at 6.4
million
viewers
,
in
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in the latest figures,
whereas
displays the smallest number of
viewers
2.2
million
.
In addition
, New Zealand and Japan are relatively as similar in
action
, romance and
comedy
number
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the viewer, they are around 3.9, 4.5 and 7.2
million
viewers
. all figures indicate that the most popular
films
in the
countries
are
action
movie
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