The chart below give in4 abourt the people use public library and vemain veasons to visit in britain in 1991 in 2000.
The given pie chart shows key data on the number of nations who use the library for many purposes in Britain in 1991 and 2000.
Overall
, we can see that the main reason to visit in 1991 and 2000 has a lot of differences a majority of visitors come to the library to borrow or arrival the
book in both years. Correct article usage
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However
,in 2000 a reason in 1991 is decreased . At the same ,time there is the appearance of borrow or entry videos .
Looking at the figures in the further
percentage of borrow and restoration book is the highest with 65% but the amount went down by 10% to 55% in 2000 .Besides
, the community who obtain information and study are the same about accounting with 10% in 1991 .After the obtain in formation is maximized 20% whereas
the population come to the library to study is come dawn only with 2% in 2000.
Turning to the remaining statistic ,there is15% of the public read newspapers or magazines in 1991 but after data numbers show us only 5% in addition
,in 2000 ,there was a change that appeared the borrow or recovery videos with 18% although
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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