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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
 map illustrates the
city
 hospital drive access in 2007 and 2010. The main difference between these two years is, we can see there are two roundabouts added in 2010. The other physical structures that have been added are
bus
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a bus
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 station and
public
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a public
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car
park
. Before these developments in 2010, there were
bus
 stops on both sides of
road
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the road
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 and staff and
public
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a public
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car
park
 on the East of the hospital
road
.
It is clear that
 in 2010,
new
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a new
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 public
car
park
 has been
build
Wrong verb form
built
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 in
east
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the east
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 of the
city
 hospital
while
,
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apply
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 the old
car
park
 has changed into
staff
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the staff
a staff
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car
park
. Looking at the map in more detail,
bus
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a bus
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 station
constructed
Add a missing verb
was constructed
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 on the west side of the hospital
road
 with two entrances for roundabouts. It is
noticable
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noticeable
 that one roundabout
located
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is located
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 on the south of
city
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the city
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 hospital with the entrance to the
bus
 station, hospital
road
 and ring
road
,
whereas
 the other roundabout
was
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is
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on
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in
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 the middle
on
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of
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 the
city
road
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, bus, car, park, road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • improvements
  • facilitate
  • congestion
  • junctions
  • streamline
  • traffic flow
  • reduce congestion
  • public transport
  • bus station
  • efficiency
  • accessibility
  • parking facilities
  • car park
  • designated
  • alleviate
  • issues
  • adequate space
  • enhancements
  • overall accessibility
  • traffic management
  • convenience
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