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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

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Nowadays, so many people leave their own nation and shift to other countries because of several reasons. Most of the purposes are academic, career and other living causes.
However
, when people move to other regions the most difficult problem they have to face is
language
 issues. Many countries use their mother tongue. As an example Japan, China, Srilanka,
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 and many more. So citizens are more relatable with their own
languageinsteadof
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language instead of
 English. That causes communication errors and a
lackof
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lack of
 socialization.
Moreover
, when people are unable to understand what
other
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 say it causes several issues.
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natives and foreigners banners and they try to avoid communicating with others. These are the some of social
problems
 that can happen because of
language
 differences.
On the other hand
, some practical
problems
also
 appear as the reason for
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 barrier. When non-natives go to shops and food stores they face
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huge
problems
of
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 talking with each other if workers speak only their
language
.
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 mostly
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 with students when they going to do teamwork.
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 unable to express their ideas correctly to others. Sometimes international students have difficulties understanding pronunciation even though they know the words
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 because pronunciation is different from country to country.
Therefore
, I agree with the statement that non-natives have to face serious social and practical
problems
 because of
language
. It is clear because of
this
 situation it is better we should learn the
language
 of the country we like to go to, and
this
 will be a good help to avoid communication
problems
.
Submitted by skn  on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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