You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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This
map illustrates the city
of Brandfield. City
planners are planning to build a new shopping mall for this
city
in two areas, S1 and S2. Overall
, This
area was divided into east and west sides by a railway
and both places S1 and S2 are located on the east side.
To begin
, a golf course and park accounted for a large part of the west side. Next to the golf course and park, the city
centre
is located in the centre
of the city
. Moreover
, on the east side of this
building, there is an industrial estate
. South of the industrial estate
, S2 is planned to build a new mall across the railway
.
Furthermore
, north of the city
centre
, a housing estate
is located across a railway
, and between the housing estate
and the railway
, there is S1, where it is planned to build a new mall. In addition
, there is a river from the north of S1 to the south of the golf course and a park across the city
centre
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