The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart illustrates the main integration problems which immigrants have to face with it divided into 3 different age groups.
Overall
, making friends is the most challenging problem for individuals from 18 to 34 years
old, however
, learning the local language is the hardest part of immigration for over 55 years
old people.
According to
the chart, 46% of the first group
struggle with finding new friends which is just 23% for the oldest group
age. Moreover
, 40% of people from 18 to 34 years
old have problems finding a suitable place for themselves to live. Also
, the same proportion of the second group
has to face this
problem.
Although
the youngest group
do not concern learning the local language as a major challenge, 54% of people over 55 years
old find it considerably difficult to learn it which was not a major concern for the younger ones. In addition
to this
, about a fifth of the oldest group
reported finding their home as a challenge which is hugely considered for the other two groups.Submitted by a.ansari3103 on
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