In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case?

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contemporary time, despite all the progress which has been done in agriculture, numerous people from all over the world still suffer from

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. I believe exploring the causes of

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issue can assist in finding suitable solutions. A growth in illegal

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could partly account for

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. In some countries, people prefer to immigrate to another country illegally in order to earn money in a better currency.

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, they seek

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a

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they do not have

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permission, they are not able to make a contract with employers.

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, these illegal immigrants do not have access to even basic amenities.

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cramped the

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society in Iran, if one of them even

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away during dosing his duty, his family will not provide with

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insurance money.

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, governments should enforce strict laws to resist in front of illegal migration.

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of

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opportunities can

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explain why

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is rising in the world.

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improvements in technology, a huge number of these gadgets are used

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of workforces. What the public need is a common

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position with an appropriate wage.

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, not only does it helpful for purchasing their needs

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as food and clothes but

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it is highly beneficial for their retirement’s time.

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, in several industries, huge machines are

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of

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which brought about numerous dilemmas for families.

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, authorities should enhance the circumstances of

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possibilities,

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education plays a vital role in addressing

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issue, so they should augment the education system as well.

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, even though illegal immigrants and lack of

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possibilities contribute to an increase in

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, governments and authorities can remedy the solution. In my opinion, imposing hefty fines and strict regulations and making more

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opportunities are steps in the right direction.