Task 1: The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph displays the changes in the proportion of the
population
which were living in cities from four countries within the Asia continent between the years 1970 to 2020 and also
provides future predictions for the next twenty years.
Overall
, All the countries' populations substantially grew in numbers throughout the period
. However
, Malaysia became the highest populated country in percentage whereas
, the least populated country which rose in percentage was Thailand
.
At the beginning of the period
, Malaysia and the Philippines were almost at the same percentage in population
but in 1990, these two countries started to show some significant changes. Malaysia kept on surging till 2040 as per the prediction at a peak of around 85% while
,
the Philippines depleted by 10% in the year 2010 and from 2020 it gradually jumped to approximately 55% of the Remove the comma
apply
population
by the end of the period
.
Furthermore
, Thailand
and Indonesia were in the range of below 20% in 1970 nevertheless
, In the year 2000, Indonesia crossed Thailand
in population
and in the next ten years, it even crossed the Philippines as well becoming the second most populated country in Asia continent by the year 2020 and also
according to
the future prediction. Apart from that, Thailand
population
steadily expanded over the period
and became the least contributor to population
in Asia continent.Add an article
the population
a population
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