The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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This
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given graph illustrates the process of nuclear power manufacturing from uranium as a raw material.
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,
this
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given graph is a man-made process which contains six dissimilar stages and it starts with
extraction
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the extraction
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of uranium as a raw
matrial
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material
from
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chemical quarry and finishes with the safe disposal of
this
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radioactive waste. In the first stage,
raw
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the raw
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material for
this
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process, uranium, is extracted from a particular quarry.
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this
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, some chemical reactions are done for enriching that raw material to a specific chemical which is called U-233
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that
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which
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is a kind of
fuel
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.
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that produced power resource is utilised to run generators for electricity production purposes. In the following 4-year period, that amount of
fuel
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will be consumed entirely so after 4 years some fraction of
fuel
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resource that can
be use
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be used
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again, is recycled and will
be turn
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be turned
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back to generators
while
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some proportion of
fuel
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that is
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not useable anymore, will be dumped by use of an appropriate and safe methods.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is".
Vocabulary: Replace the words fuel with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nuclear fission
  • Radioactive material
  • Reactor core
  • Control rods
  • Coolant
  • Thermal energy
  • Steam generator
  • Turbine
  • Generator
  • Spent fuel
  • Radioactive waste
  • Depleted uranium
  • Decommissioning
  • Sustainable energy
  • Nuclear proliferation
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