You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. What are advantages and disadvantages of this development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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Access to isolated natural habitats like the South
Pole
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now become possible for tourists and scientists because of the advancements made in the transportation industry. Some people may say that
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has enabled the researchers to discover more natural resources
whereas
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some may argue that
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increased human activity, it has
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to the pollution of the natural habitats. Places like the South
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pole
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have not been researched much because of the travel and environmental limitations,
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with advanced technologies in place today we might be
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the verge of making breakthrough discoveries for natural resources that can be highly beneficial to the survival of the human race. For
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, it was recently discovered that the south
pole
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consist
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of several natural resources lying deep within the glaciers which need
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study. The infrastructure
that is
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being developed to
accomodate
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accommodate
visitors in
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locations
like
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the construction of hotels, roads, hospitals, ports and airports has led to the destruction of the
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natural habitats for the arctic animals. Over the years, with increased human activity in the south
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in
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the melting
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of glaciers and migration of the arctic animals to other regions has been observed, as human
existance
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existence
has made it difficult for them to survive.
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is one of the biggest disadvantages of
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development.
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, there is a huge potential
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scientific discoveries that can prove to be highly beneficial to the human race, but
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, allowing tourism in these untouched locations can have significant effects on the natural ecosystem of the south
pole
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