The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the
number
of
people
who visited a particular Caribbean
island
in a seven-year
period
, between 2010 and 2017.
Overall
, the total
number
of tourists attracted to
this
certain
island
increased.
While
the
number
of visitors who preferred to stay on cruise ships rose, the
number
of ones who stayed on the
island
fell during the
period
in question. In 2019, the
island
was visited by one
million
people
, and most of them decided to stay on the
island
, well above 500,000. In the first half of the
period
in question, the
number
of
people
who chose to spend their residency on the
island
improved by approximately one
million
. At the same time, the
number
of tourists who liked to stay on cruises ranged from almost 250,000 to half a
million
. In the second half of the
period
in question, the popularity of cruise accommodation increased significantly, and by 2016 it had surpassed the figure for residency on the
island
, and the
number
reached 2
million
visitors. In 2017, the
number
of
people
who still preferred to stay on the
island
reached 1.5
million
. Looking at the total
number
of tourists, it witnessed a steady rise until 2015, when it reached more than 2.5
million
people
. Despite remaining constant for one year,
then
the figure jumped to 3.5
million
in 2017.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, island, period, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 8 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 5 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • visitor numbers
  • trend analysis
  • stability
  • popularity
  • significant changes
  • peak periods
  • low points
  • global tourism trends
  • economic downturns
  • natural disasters
  • tourist patterns
  • dynamic nature
  • factors influencing
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