The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the
number
of people
who visited a particular Caribbean island
in a seven-year period
, between 2010 and 2017.
Overall
, the total number
of tourists attracted to this
certain island
increased. While
the number
of visitors who preferred to stay on cruise ships rose, the number
of ones who stayed on the island
fell during the period
in question.
In 2019, the island
was visited by one million
people
, and most of them decided to stay on the island
, well above 500,000. In the first half of the period
in question, the number
of people
who chose to spend their residency on the island
improved by approximately one million
. At the same time, the number
of tourists who liked to stay on cruises ranged from almost 250,000 to half a million
.
In the second half of the period
in question, the popularity of cruise accommodation increased significantly, and by 2016 it had surpassed the figure for residency on the island
, and the number
reached 2 million
visitors. In 2017, the number
of people
who still preferred to stay on the island
reached 1.5 million
. Looking at the total number
of tourists, it witnessed a steady rise until 2015, when it reached more than 2.5 million
people
. Despite remaining constant for one year, then
the figure jumped to 3.5 million
in 2017.Submitted by athena.karimzadeh on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, island, period, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 8 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 5 times.
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