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The table below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph lays off information about the percentage of
three
 different kinds of substances, carbohydrates, protein, and fat contained in
three
 types of diets. The data is written in the unit of percentage.
This
 writing will highlight some important features from the chart for a university lecturer
elaborating
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the
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 information and compare them when necessary. The graph shows that there are
three
 essential ingredients existing inside all
of
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apply
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commercial food. Natrium, which is needed as a daily nutrition, is mostly supplied by having dinners and lunches, with
the
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percentages of 43% and 29%, respectively.
In contrast
, Sugar
addition
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 digested by the body is given by snacks, reaching the percentage of 42%, which is the highest number compared to the other
three
.
In addition
, breakfast only contributes 16% worth of lipids which contain a double bond or more and carbohydrates.
Moreover
, breakfasts have the least
nutritions
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nutrition
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. It never contributes more than 16% to the intake of sodium, fat and sugar.
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