Nowadays, different media, including newspapers, magazines, television, radio, and even the Internet, publish stories about people's private lives. Why is it so? Should this practice be banned? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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this
technological era,
people
use different types of
media
such
as newspapers, magazines,
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, radio or other sources of internet-based to share other
people
’s personal live
story
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stories
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. In
this
essay, I am going to explore the main reasons behind publishing other
people
’s personal live in the
media
. First of all, publishing
others
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work
ethically
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not
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approved and it needs to take permission from them.
Additionally
, highlighting
others
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stories bring some negative aspects to
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human societies. There are some reasons behind exploring
people
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data in the
media
.
For example
, increasing popularity and achieving comments and likes
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of
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causes. As it is clear
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us, attractive posts lead to rise
likes
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as well as
writing comments.
Therefore
,
people
post
others
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data or
works
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in order to become more popular in the world.
Secondly
, success stories may use
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source
for
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motivation
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others
.
People
share positive stories in order to enhance
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activities.
For instance
, some successful
teacher’s
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story published
in
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the
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social
media
such
as
face book
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facebook
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or
magazines
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just for increasing
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motivation to try hard and achieve what they want. I can mention here a sentence like ‘
if
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you do what other
people
did you can get what they have if you do not do it no one can help you.
I
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conclusion, post
others
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private lives or personal data needs to take permission from them.
People
post
others
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personal lives because of several reasons
such
as
increasing
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their
view
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views
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or they do it just for motivational purposes.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • freedom of the press
  • public interest
  • sensationalism
  • lucrative
  • advertisers
  • regulation
  • invasion of privacy
  • ethical considerations
  • transparent information
  • prominent figures
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