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The diagram below displays the process of manufacturing instant
noodles
. Overall
, the process consists of eight steps. It starts when the flour is stored in silos, and ends when manufactured instant noodles
are labelled and sealed.
First of all, the stored flour in silos is put in a container and brought to the manufactory. Then
, some water and oil are added and they are mixed with the flour. The mixture then
moves under a few rollers, which are used for turning the mixture into dough sheets. When the dough sheets are shaped, they will enter a machine which reshapes them into dough strips.
Subsequently
, the strips will shape noodles
discs, and that is
when they are considered to be ready to move forward and be cooked and dried. After cooking and drying the noodles
discs, they are placed in cups. Following
this
, vegetables and spices are added to the cups, and this
is when they are prepared for labelling and sealing part.Submitted by athena.karimzadeh on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words noodles with synonyms.
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