The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart illustrates information regarding the total of tourists visiting some areas like the coast, mountains, and lakes in Europe from 1987 to 2007.
Overall
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, the statistics of tourists increased in all areas, even though the up and down trend happened during the given periods. The increasing number of foreigners to the mountains is indicated as the lowest compared with the others; the coast and lakes. As can be seen from the graph, the number of guests who visited the mountains gradually increased, starting from 20 visitors in 1987 and ending up at around 35 in 2007.
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, those who went to the coast diminished from 40 in 1987 to only approximately 35 guests in 1992,
while
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the sharply increasing trend occurred for the rest of the period.
Conversely
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, the total of users of the lakes experienced an increasing trend in the beginning when the total number of foreigners up from 10 to about 75 and
then
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decreased from 2002 until 2007.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Significant
  • Trends
  • Comparative analysis
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Steady
  • Surge
  • Plummet
  • Consistency
  • Highlight
  • Reinforce
  • Data representation
  • Time frame
  • Subject matter
  • Overseas visitors
  • Tourism promotion
  • Transportation
  • Accommodation facilities
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