The chart below shows the result of survey of patient who stayed in three different wards of a hospitals. It shows what percentage of the patients replied "very good" aout various aspects of their hospital ecperience.
Overall
, the bar chart illustrates the demographic figures of patient
views and reactions according to
the hospital's ward
facility, which is in proportion to three different wards.
Firstly
, the hospital staff in a holly ward
was rated with very good replies by patients in a proportion of nearly 90%. Where is maple
ward
Was rated lowest staff satisfaction at above 50% followed by nearly 70% in oak
ward
. However
, waiting time was quite disappointing in Maple
and Oak
wards with patient
reactions of between 60 to 50% and an average in Holly ward
approx. at 74%.
On the other hand
, patient
in each of these Wards was suppressing happiness with the quality of treatment at the highest in a holy ward
at 90%, 70% in the maple
ward
and 10% lower than the holly ward
in the oak
ward
. but aftercare of treatment was reacted and averaged at 50% in Maple
ward
and 70% quite nice in Oak
ward
. Although
patient
reaction in Holly ward
in each of these categories was significantly high in comparison to others lastly
at almost 90% of happy patients in aftercare treatment.Submitted by user349953 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words patient, ward, maple, oak with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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