Museums and art galleries should concentrate on works that show history and culture of their own country rather than works of the other parts in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the number of

museums

and

art

galleries is dramatically increasing throughout the world. Some of them are supported by either the government or private investors. The understandable result of

this

,

while

some of them can focus on just their own

national's

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masterpieces, others show a general piece of

art

. Some people believe that

museums

and

art

galleries should show the history and

culture

of their own country more than others. I totally disagree with

this

idea and would like to express my thoughts. First of all, showing exhibition in

museums

and

art

galleries create a chance to make money from

coming

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visitors who live in foreign countries.

For example

, today Van Gogh's reputation

wide

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spreads over oceans, and some of his oil paintings are shown around the world by different

museums

.

This

exhibition helps to hit the number of visitors and to spread out

Netherland's

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culture

anywhere via the visitors' minds and vivid memories.

Thus

, a country which wants to promote its national

culture

could use the

art

and national artists for

this

occasion.

Secondly

, tourism plays a crucial role in countries developing these days.

For instance

, in the summertime, most people travel to the Mediterranean countries because of the natural picturesque beauties,

such

as the habitat, sea etc. Meanwhile, most tourists would like to see a museum which has significant importance in their own

culture

. It is possible to say that, a Turkish person who visits Greece could access a specific collection of bringing its country. For ages, the

art

collection

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around the world. Because of

this

, having and showing a foreign collection has critical importance to be an attractive centre. So,

to sum up

, expressing either local artists' or foreign famous artists' collections

has

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one of the most important parts

to gain

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income from tourism. The government ought to

make co-operations

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other nations' authorities to expand the arts' impact and fame.