The maps show the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Write a report of at least 150 words, summarizing the main features and making comparison where relevant.
The maps present the changes that occurred in the
town
of Stokeford between 1930 and 2010.
Overall
, Stokeford increased significantly in size over the period with houses
replacing areas that used to be farmland.
Stokeford is situated on the east side of the River Stoke. In 1930, there was one main road going through the town
from north to south. Along each side of the road were some houses
, some shops, a post office, and a primary school. By 2010, the post office still remained, but the shops had been replaced by more houses
. There were also
new roads built to connect the new houses
to the main road. Moreover
, the primary school had been enlarged and even more houses
had been built to the west of the town
in an area that was farmland in 1930.
To the southeast of the town
, there were some public gardens with a large house, but this
was converted into a retirement home sometime over the period. Finally
, the farmland that had been to the south of the town
was also
converted into a new housing areaSubmitted by Layla on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
▼
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, houses with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
▼