The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.

The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.
The provided table demonstrates the variation rates in the age category of 65 and above In the Canadian, German and British populations between 1988 and 2000
as well as
the expected increasing volume by 2030.
Overall
, it is evident that the elder ages have the minority of
population
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in the three countries, but a quarter of the German populace is approximately over 65 ages. As can be seen, Germany gave the highest percentage in comparison with the others when in 1988 was at 20%, Canada was at 16% and the
UK
constituted the lowest percentage and accounted for 14% of the over-aged citizens.
consequently
, the population rates increased by 2000 in the same pattern when Germany came in the front at 25%
then
Canada at 21% and next
UK
at just 15%.
While
there are similarities between Canada and Germany in the variation rates when both rose by 5 % in 2000.
Accordingly
, the
overall
forecast rate by 2030 will be in the same previous pattern,
although
the
UK
recorded just 1% over the proceeded year.
This
indicates that the major average of age-expectancy in the
UK
is nearly under 65 years.
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  • percentage change
  • population
  • aged 65 and above
  • information
  • table
  • data
  • trends
  • patterns
  • comparison
  • predicted
  • future
  • findings
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