Informal Letter A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with hi/her on your next holidays. You are too busy to accept the invitation.

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Dearest Sara, I hope you are doing splendidly, it has been

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time since I heard from you. I am writing

this

to thank you for the invitation but, I have some personal issues going on in my life so, it will not be possible to see you during

this

vacation time. I was overjoyed when I got

invitation

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an invitation

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from you but ,

then

I realised that my mother is getting her eyes operated

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on in

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the same month when

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will get days off from work. Unfortunately, it will be a busy summer

this

year but I promise you that I will come to see you next year and we will make plans for the vacation next year. I hope you understand my situation. looking forward to

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back from you. Yours loving, Simran

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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